【寫作任務(wù)】

假如你是學(xué)校校報(bào)英文版的記者，最近采訪了學(xué)?；@球隊(duì)隊(duì)長(zhǎng)蘇凱。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的采訪摘要，寫一篇關(guān)于蘇凱的英文報(bào)道。不少于50詞。

蘇凱

· 喜歡體育運(yùn)動(dòng)：籃球、網(wǎng)球(容易)

· 喜歡綠色(令人放松)

· 不喜歡看電視(沒趣)

· 房間很整潔，有很多東西

參考詞匯：

隊(duì)長(zhǎng) captain 隊(duì)team 很多東西 many things

【思路點(diǎn)撥】

該寫作任務(wù)要求同學(xué)們寫一篇關(guān)于蘇凱的英文報(bào)道。寫作時(shí)，首先要內(nèi)容全面，要包括采訪摘要中的所有信息。其次，語言既要簡(jiǎn)潔、明了，準(zhǔn)確地對(duì)蘇凱進(jìn)行描述，又要生動(dòng)、流暢，能引起讀者閱讀的興趣。

【學(xué)生習(xí)作】

Su Kai is captain of our school basketball team. He likes basketball and tennis. He thinks they are easy. He likes the colour green. He thinks its a relaxing colour. Su Kai doesnt like watching TV. He thinks its boring. He has a tidy room. He has many things in his room.

【習(xí)作點(diǎn)評(píng)】

1.習(xí)作內(nèi)容完整，包含了寫作任務(wù)中的所有內(nèi)容提示；用詞準(zhǔn)確，easy，relaxing，boring等形容詞清楚地表達(dá)了蘇凱的喜好。

2.習(xí)作語言較為單一，句型多為“He likes ...”或“He thinks ...”。如果語言再靈活一些就更好了。

3.習(xí)作的最后一句完全按照采訪摘要的順序來寫。如果能調(diào)整一下順序，文章會(huì)顯得更生動(dòng)、邏輯性更強(qiáng)。

【習(xí)作改進(jìn)】

Su Kai is captain of our school basketball team. He likes basketball and tennis. They are easy for him. He likes the colour green. He thinks its a relaxing colour. Su Kai doesnt like watching TV. Its boring. He has many things in his room, but the room is tidy.