英語作文 | 英語寫作中如何讓語句邏輯更完整?教你這招“換詞大法”!
原標題:英語作文 | 英語寫作中如何讓語句邏輯更完整?教你這招“換詞大法”!
只要提起寫作文,老師都會要求我們要做到“邏輯嚴謹”“結構完整”。
對于語文作文,想做到這點其實是挺難的,因為中文是意合語言,要考慮到每兩句話之間內在的邏輯。
但是在寫英語作文的時候則容易得多!
因為英語是一種“形合語言”,我們所需要做的就是運用“換詞大法”將作文從形式上+內容上進行全面升級!
首先我們來看一看如何在形式上運用“換詞大法”,我們將目前常用的過渡詞根據(jù)具體用法的不同,分成九類。
此時的“換詞”意味著扔掉你那干癟生硬的英語,在句子之間加上一些“過渡詞”,讓句子在形式上更完整。
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01 解釋過渡詞
如果剛剛寫完一句話,然后想解釋一下,那么你要用到的是“解釋過渡詞”:now, in addition, for, in this case, furthermore, in fact ,這類過渡詞能夠有效增加語句的說服力,同時增加文章字數(shù)。
事實上,英語本身就是一種“解釋型語言”(漢語是一種“定義型語言”),解釋過渡詞用得好不好,直接體現(xiàn)了你的英語硬實力!
(1)The problem, in this case, is hard to solve.
(2)Furthermore, several people telephoned the same night.
02時間過渡詞
在記敘文里面,時間順序是最重要的順序;
在圖表文中,也常用表示時間的過渡詞來加強數(shù)據(jù)之間的聯(lián)系以說明變化規(guī)律!
如下,是關于家庭消費結構變化的作文。
The average family income in our Kangming City increased from 8,000 yuan per year in 1998 to 20,000 yuan in 2008.
In the meantime, the structure of the average family expenses has changed, too.
These graphs show the change clearly.
下面這句是大家常用的“現(xiàn)象解釋型”議論文的開頭模式:
Recently, we have made a survey of the people on physical training.
Only 35 percent of the people surveyed have taken part in physical activities.
03 強調過渡詞
如果你說完一個道理,感覺表達的不完整,想要強調一下,那么你應該使用“強調過渡詞”,如:certainly, indeed, above all, surely, most important
(1)Indeed, a dessert is always enjoyable.
(2)Above all, do not build an open fire in a forest.
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04 轉折過渡詞
【but, however, although, though, yet, except for 】
(1)Yet there was still a chance that he would win.
(2)Except for one girl, all the hikers returned.
05舉例過渡詞
【for example, for instance, thus, such, next 】
(1)For instance, a telegram often costs more than a telephone call.
(2)Thus the trip finally began.
06 遞進或補充過渡詞
【in addition,furthermore,also,moreover,yet 】
(1)In addition, the tour stops in Vancouver.
(2)Furthermore, the time for registration has been extended.
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07 順序的過渡詞
【first, second, third, afterward(s)(后來), meanwhile(幾乎同時), thereafter (在那以后), last, finally, eventually(終于) 】
(1)First, you mail in an application. Second, you ask for an appointment. Third, you send them three personal references.
(2)Then you come to a traffic light and turn right.
08比較過渡詞
【like, in the same way, similarly, equally important, too 】
(1)In the same way, we look for a good doctor.
(2)Similarly, the Thais enjoy spicy foods.
09 對比過渡詞
【unlike, in contrast, whereas, on the other hand, instead 】
(1)In contrast, the red fluid does not lose its color.
(2)The husband wanted a boy, whereas the wife wanted a girl.
此外,從內容上進行“換詞”也必不可少,畢竟很多同學都面臨著詞匯量匱乏的情況,那些用到“惡心”的詞語如何才能華麗大轉身呢?
我們可以先看看此種“換詞大法”的三點注意事項,打起精神來牢記吧!
【注1】拒絕冗長,力求實用!聽我一席話,省下十本書!
【注2】箭頭左邊是原詞,右邊是推薦的換詞,有多個換詞的一般按照難易程度排列,可以按照你目前的英文水平選擇一兩個使用。
【注3】如果一篇文章里面同一個詞要用兩次以上,優(yōu)先使用換詞,換詞不夠了可以用原詞,原詞盡量往后用但是不要用在結尾句。
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10 換詞大法
1. like → be fond of/be crazy about/delight in/rejoice in/take pleasure in/appreciate/
2.all + 名詞復數(shù)(如students)→ every single student
【注意名詞單復數(shù)變化】
3. think about/consider → take into account
4.want to do sth → intend to do sth/tend to do sth/be inclined to do sth./ be longing for doing sth./be thirst for doing sth
5. more and more+n. → n.+in /growing/increasing/significant/numbers
6. more and more +adj (如important) → increasingly important
7.most+n.(如student) → an overwhelmingly majority ofa significant proportion of a sizable percentage of
8. not → by no means的不完全倒裝句型。
【例】By no means shall we give up trying.我們決絕能停止努力。
【注】by no means 可以用在“正裝”句型中,如:This is by no means a good way to solve the problem. 這絕不是解決問題的最好方法。
9. should do → be supposed to do
10. good --> excellent
11. want sth→desire sth. 高級詞匯使情感強度更加具體
12. but→nevertheless/nonetheless 高級詞匯使情感強度更加具體(“盡管如此,但是...”)How things have changed!(大轉折,用于句首,替換But.)
13. always →consistently /constantly/continually/eternally/perpetually
14. enough → abundant/adequate/sufficient
15. important →essential/vital/crucial/fundamental/indispensable
16. now → nowadays/these days/ recently
17. really →undoubtedly/absolutely 18. very → extremely/surprisingly //unusually/excessively/noticeably/exceedingly
19. many → a number of/ plenty of/ a multitude of/ many+n.+,if not most,+...(經典插入語)
20. good friend→ true friend/close friend/constant friend/a friend indeed
21. big → distinct 清楚的、明顯的 (可以加到difference/change等詞的前面)
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