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（三） 熱點(diǎn)話題滿分寫人記敘文必背

一

鄧亞萍是世界上最出色的乒乓球運(yùn)動(dòng)員之一。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示寫一篇關(guān)于她的作文。

1）1973 年出生于鄭州。

2）5 歲的時(shí)候開始打乒乓球，她努力訓(xùn)練，所以她后來成為一名偉大的運(yùn)動(dòng)員。

3）她贏得了很多世界比賽，包括在奧運(yùn)會(huì)中的四枚金牌。我們?yōu)樗湴痢?/span>

4）鄧亞萍二十四歲時(shí)停止打乒乓球。在那之后她開始在北京的清華大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)，并且出國深

造。

5）七年之后，她在劍橋大學(xué)完成了她的博士學(xué)位。無論她做什么，她從不放棄。

注意：

1）詞數(shù)：不少于 80；

2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

提示詞：in the Olympics 在奧運(yùn)會(huì)中 Tsinghua University 清華大學(xué)

Cambridge University 劍 橋大學(xué)

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優(yōu)秀滿分范文One possible version:

My hero is Deng Yaping. She is one of the best table tennis players in the world. Let me tell you something about her.

Deng Yaping was born in Zhengzhou in 1973. She started playing table tennis when she was five years old. She trained hard,so she became a great player later.

She’s won many world competitions, including four gold medals in the Olympics. We are all proud of her. Deng Yaping stopped playing table tennis when she was twenty-four. After that, she began to study at Tsinghua University in Beijing and attended

university abroad. Seven years later,she completed her doctor’s degree at

Cambridge University. Whatever she does, she never gives up. She is simply the

best. She is a true hero.

In short, she is so great that we will learn from her. As long as we study hard, our

dream will come true one day.

詳解

1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。介紹世界上最出色的乒乓球運(yùn)動(dòng)員之一——鄧亞萍的相

關(guān)情況。

2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)為主，人稱采用第三人稱。分為三段式：

第一段引出主題；第二段介紹她的個(gè)人信息以及她在乒乓球上取得的成就；第三段表達(dá)自己

對(duì)她的欽佩之情。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。

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本屆東京奧運(yùn)會(huì)上跳水小將全紅嬋一戰(zhàn)成名，給全世界留下了深刻印象。假設(shè)你是 Mary，

你的筆友 John 想多了解一些全紅嬋的相關(guān)情況。請(qǐng)你給 John 寫一封信，介紹一下這位奧運(yùn)

小明星并表達(dá)你對(duì)她的祝愿。要點(diǎn)如下：

Age

14

From

Guangdong

Team

Chinese diving team

Family

Parents (farmers); the second child

Looks

Love

diving (every day)

Like

computer games (free time)

Dream

more champions (冠軍)

注意事項(xiàng)：

1.信件必須包括以上要點(diǎn)信息，要求語句通順，意思連貫；2.詞數(shù) 60 個(gè)左右，信件的開頭和結(jié)尾部分已在答題卷上給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

3.信件必須寫在答題卷的指定位置上。

Dear John,

I am happy to tell you something about Quan Hongchan.

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All the best, Mary

優(yōu)秀滿分范文

One possible version:

Dear John,

I am happy to tell you something about Quan Hongchan. She’s 14. She comes from Guangdong.

She’s in Chinese diving team. Quan’s parents are farmers. She’s the second child in her family.

She’s short and thin. She looks cute. She loves diving and practises it every day.

In her free time,she likes playing computer games. Her dream is to get more

champions for China. I hope her dream comes true.

All the best,

Mary

詳解

1.題干解讀：該題目屬于書信作文。題目要求是請(qǐng)你以 Mary 的身份，根據(jù)提示背景，給你

的筆友John寫一封60詞左右的信，向他介紹一下奧運(yùn)小明星全紅嬋，并表達(dá)你對(duì)她的祝愿。

2.寫法指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱主要是第三人稱；寫作中，要根據(jù)提示要點(diǎn)介紹

全紅嬋的個(gè)人信息、家庭信息，最后表達(dá)你對(duì)全紅嬋的祝愿。文章要緊扣題目要點(diǎn)，千萬不

要遺漏要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容可適發(fā)揮，但要保證語句通順，意思連貫，語言的表述要符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，

造句要符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，不要出現(xiàn)語法錯(cuò)誤。

三

請(qǐng)以“He/She Has Changed a Lot”為題，從外貌、性格、愛好或其他方面介紹一下你身

邊的一個(gè)人在這幾年的變化。

要求：1. 至少寫出三個(gè)變化，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

2. 80 詞左右。

He/She Has Changed a Lot

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優(yōu)秀滿分范文

He Has Changed a Lot

My friend Jimmy has changed a lot in the last few years.

Jimmy used to be fat and eat a lot of unhealthy food. Three years ago, his doctor told him that he should do more exercise and eat healthily. So he took doctor’s advice

and did more exercise to lose weight. Now he is thinner and healthier.

Jimmy used to hate the school life. One year ago, he and his parents had a long talk. That’s when he decided to change. Now he studies harder than he used to. He knows that his parents love him and they are proud of him.

Jimmy used to be shy. His face would turn red when he talked to people. Now he is more outgoing and can give speeches in public. That makes him more popular.

People sure change! I’m glad to see my friend’s great change.

詳解

題干解讀：該題目是話題作文，從外貌、性格、愛好或其他方面介紹一下你身邊的一個(gè)人在

這幾年的變化。

寫作指導(dǎo)：人稱用第三人稱；時(shí)態(tài)主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)；寫作時(shí)，可采用“總分

總”的思路來寫，先說這個(gè)人在過去幾年發(fā)生了很大的變化，然后具體闡述變化體現(xiàn)的方面，

最后進(jìn)行總結(jié)。注意保證內(nèi)容完整、結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，無語法和拼寫錯(cuò)誤。

四

根據(jù)要求完成小作文。談一談自己的一個(gè)愛好。

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優(yōu)秀滿分范文

Everyone has hobbies. Hobbies give us a lot of happiness. Then what’s my hobby? My hobby is listening to music.

When I was a child, I enjoy listening to music, especially the cartoon music. As I

grow up, I like all kinds of music. Though I’m not good at it, I often lose myself in it. When I am in trouble, music can make me calm down. When I am very tired, it can

make me comfortable. When I am angry with something, it also can make me happy again. Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it’s good for my health.

Do you like listening to music? If not, I hope you can have a try. You’ll find it so

good.

詳解

1.題干解讀：題干要求談?wù)撟约旱膼酆?。寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)圍繞自己的一個(gè)愛好進(jìn)行介紹，并適當(dāng)

添加具體內(nèi)容，比如，有這一愛好的原因或這一愛好的好處是什么。

2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱主要使用第一人稱?？煞譃槿危旱谝欢?/span>

點(diǎn)明自己的愛好是什么；第二段陳述這一愛好的好處；第三段對(duì)自己的愛好進(jìn)行推薦并收尾。

寫作時(shí)，注意主謂一致，無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。